Fluttershy's Angels

Here's my first attempt at Pony fanfiction. It stars Fluttershy and Big Macintosh. It's a little shippy, but it doesn't go beyond what could be taken as friendship for those that aren't fans of pony romance. I'm probably going to submit it to Equestria Daily at some point, but I want to get more proofreading done on it first. That's where you guys come in. Enjoy.

Fluttershy's Angels

Well I read it, and liked it. I don't think it needs any grammar or spelling fixed, and the story made perfect sense so... I think you did quite well here. I'd say work on something like a 'part 2' or some other continuation then I think It would be ready to be sent to EqD. Good work.

Thanks for the feedback! I already submitted it to EqD, but it was rejected because it's on the short side. I think you're right, a second part would probably help.